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She was born with smile that cleanse the darkest soul
while the innocence of her laughter could block out the sounds of gun shots & police sirens signing through da hollows pitch of night 
Given the eyes of an angel that shall only make your heart wonder if she's the definition of love when you see her
For in your mind she the closes thought of perfection 
so why does such beauty cries herself to sleep? 
Fearing to look into the mirror as if it is the devil himself she see within herself
Scared to tell the world her dreams as if they would be our nightmares 
She lives but dies slowly stranded in her own thoughts running from a monster called "Self Conscious" 
If only I could give her my eyes shall then they could be her new mirror & love all her imperfections
Take the heart out my chest place it in front of her so she can every scene like movie she inspired
& of course I'd call it "HER" 
Maybe then she wouldn't be so "Self Cautious" 

 

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Poetunleashed says:

I like this piece its an amazing write
 

Woven says:

This read like the depths of love wanting her to see the best as you do. Beautiful that you care to help her adjust her lenses, and beautiful is this piece. Fabulous!

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RonnieL says:

This piece reeled me in....excellent write.

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Nice!

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