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then came you

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romance

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thought i had me

thought that was enough

then i got cold

and couldn't cover up

 

traveled the world

found that there is no place like home

built a house

only to watch my heart roam

 

read the book

written of my heart

prayed for my other half

but failed to do my part

 

weighed the tally of my love

and thought that love was through

then came the rains

then came you

 

reborn, different address - same place

smiles inside finally reaching my face

black clouds picked a new color blue

love tickled me - then came you

 

after vision - aka charles garner

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RonnieL says:

Really feelin this piece. Imagery of words...dead on! Excellent write my man.

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after vision says:

thank you for taking time out to leave a few kind words

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hymnagen says:

"read the book written of my heart prayed for my other half but failed to do my part" this stanza is a poem in itself. Enjoyable read, after vision. Admiring the pseudonym as well. Clever.

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AFTER VISION says:

thanks for the time that you took out of your day to share your thoughts
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Dope flow!
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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After vision says:

Thank you my poets for the love share and proof that you stopped by

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mrmelody7 says:

Beautiful write the title jumped out because its a favorite song of mine by the Spinners and Dion Warwick
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lovelylady1 says:

My king, this poem answers the question many women ask, do men have hearts? yes, they do! thank you
 

gabby says:

I LOVE THIS IT'S REALLY GOOD THANKS FOR THE COMMENT

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