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cancer

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if in your heart

the questions that arrive - arrives with answers

and beats - the beats

then it's causing your heart - cancer

 

if in your mind

the smell of the unseen fills the air

thats just questions with answers

meeting you there

 

if you have grown tired

of the bad questions for your answers

do yourself a favor

and cut out that cancer

 

charles garner aka after vision

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Coalhouse says:

Nice piece

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Powerful write!
 

after vision says:

thanks coalhouse and nosajm for the read and the reach

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blakmista says:

Very well written.

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mrmelody7 says:

Your writings are very meaningful sir
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lovelylady1 says:

A wonderful metaphor to describe the negative things that should be removed. I'm so quick to cut out that which hurts me that I my choice in the field of medicine should've been surgeon! Thank you my dear king for the encouraging ink!

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LP45 says:

Negativity is like weeds in a garden, it's always trying to keep us from growing. Dig your work here aftervision.
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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