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depression

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i use to think theres something wrong with me until one day my Dawg said aint nothing wrong with ya. you just afraid of whats new. you afraid of missing out on everything you wanna do. i said "true" as i slowly sip some more liqour...

  depressed forgetting that i am so gifted. mama always use to say boy you so gifted. Now shes gone nobody to keep my soul lifted. Writing songs and poems to help me cope with it.. as i slowly sip somemore liqour....

man life can be so hard so hard like when you buy a new car a new car and you wreck soon as you take off in it...

My girl call my celly just to see whats up with me. she ask me why i foward her calls and text message. Are you cheating or what!?! is it somebody else man i really need to know keep it real with me. the truth hurts and lies dont feel no different. so i told her yea even tho im not cheating. I need time to my self!!! as i slowly sip some more liqour, yea...

man life can be so hard so hard like when you buy a new car a new car and you wreck soon as you take off in it... man life can be so hard so hard like when you buy a new car a new car and you wreck soon as you take off in it...

my oh my oh my whats going on here. my life took a 360 turn here. I use to be so happy but now sadly I dont know how to feel. As I slowly sip away...

Man life can be so hard so hard like when you buy a new car a new car and you wreck soon as you take off in it. lord take this pain away....

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is so potent. Those deep moments are the ones that make you think, this is a Poem.

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chrisj21390 says:

yea thanks man!! i try to paint a picture everytime i write to try connect with those who are reading.

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after vision says:

my poet, the way that you brush your pen across the page forces one to see. that is a blessing, stay grounded and continue brushing your truth

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chrisj21390 says:

thanks bro and i will do so....

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shortiiie_q says:

nice write , i say the same thing when something does't feel right... -lord take this pain away . And he do every time. thank you for sharing .

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Dope flow!
 

Miss_chaniel says:

Deep ......enjoy every bit

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