You say you like my hair locked, twisted, braided or naturally kinky curly
You don't care as long as it's on me
I change my hair like I change my clothes......depends on my mood
I like to think of myself dancing inside of your brain
Like wildfire
Immortality is in my eyes
I whispered lightly into your ear
Come inside & live forever with me........
Words can be so seductive
Tali
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Immortal (haiku)
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OG BEATNIK says: This is nice although the judges cannot count it as (Haiku) unless you can paint the picture with 17 syllables or less, remember say more with less. You posess the fire |
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The Immortal Wize says: Nice! |
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Tali says: Fair is fair lol I figured I was pushing it with the length. I appreciate the feedback |
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Tali says: And advice |
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mrmelody7 says: Words can so suductive so true Seeker Of Knowledge as well as the one behind them words its so pizzaz |
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tao Culture says: ☯☯☯☯☯ |
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love_supreme says: Excellent write. |
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