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Abandoned Trunk...

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There lay the old gray trunk;

never to hold anything again.

There, in the wet soil,

a sadden decaying lump.

Stilled in the soft gentle rain;

lifeless—without coil.

 

Gone are the traveling memories

and self-gushing showers;

leaving only companion ivory

to be tombstone flowers.

 

Thus is the sad fate

of a great regal elephant;

victim of greed’s sake—

and man’s pleasured hunt.

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LP45 says:

Great write Mlowe5. A beautiful but sad tale of how man's greed will always come at a price. For something.
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed true, Ladypoet45. Thanks for the reads and time taken to offer your contrinuous feedback. Again, much appreciated. Peace and Love, mlowe5.
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2b2b2 says:

FAN-Tastic Writing and Eloquent Depiction.....thanks for sharing.......

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mlowe5 says:

2b2b2! Thank you my Brother. So good to hear from you. I pray all is well with you and yours. Peace, Love and more Light, mlowe5

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