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SquareRootz
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Oatmeal cookie Crush

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They called it ‘puppy love’ but this love was more like a cub. We was, just two kids on a playground. Little balls of emotions going round and round like the wheels on a bus. We was ‘dizzy in love’. Couldn’t tell if it was authentic or just the -merry go round- Whatever it was, we felt the Student Council meeting wasn’t enough to stop us from calling the other's bluff. See, earlier that day I almost threw up my guts – mustering the nerve to finally sit next to my crush. It all happened at lunch, we traded. A cookie for a punch. I watched anxiously as she ate it. When she was done I asked her how it was you know, because moms made it. She took one sip from her milk and looked up. With a smile she said “I don’t really like raisins but that was amazing” All I heard was amazing. In my head I was like ‘perfect’. Here's an opportunity for me to ask if she wanted to hold hands while we walked to class. Too bad the only thing any of us could hear was the bell ring…

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skb74# says:

Love the way you pull the reader into the story and opps, the bell rings, Nice!

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Dope flow!
 

SquareRootz says:

I apologize for the confusion but this is the first installment of a urban love saga. Please support and read the next installment. Thanks

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love_supreme says:

This is nice. Excellent write.

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