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Charles2 says: absolute brilliant opening... more? |
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mrmelody7 says: Sir Charles 2 good 2 see you still at it thank you sometimes less is more readers can fill in the blanks but for more seriously listen closely to the lyrics from Freddies Dead by Curtis Mayfield one line says we can deal with rockets and dreams but reality what does it mean aint nothin said cause Freddies dead On my Spring and Summer hiatus from writing |
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Elvan says: Tight very tight, it causes one to think if not deeply it does awaken a desire to think. Exceptionally delivered Mrmelody7. |
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mrmelody7 says: As always thank you Sir |
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LP45 says: You do have a way with words mrmelody7. So much said with so few words. Thanks for sharing. Peace. |
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mrmelody7 says: Tank U Ladypoet45 yeah a quickie I understand people have a short attention span cause I do so I try to get straight to the point try not to write um long |
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2b2b2 says: Petit, Sweet |
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mrmelody7 says: Your comment makes it complete |
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mlowe5 says: Sweet! I hear you Bro. We need to stay on top of things. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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mrmelody7 says: HA HA I like that follow thru >We got to stay on top of things |
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Brownchildt says: Heartfelt and to the point.. I like that. Thank you for sharing. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you as Brother mlowe5 says we gotta stay on top of things |
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mlowe5 says: Sometimes...Flipflopping! |
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Monks A WalkinMonks come out from hidin walkin for peace for a country so deeply divided they movin at a very fast pace they say 30 miles a day comin through today in the state I stay SC as they scurry about in such a rapid way They R headed to DC to show share their message of love they want to convey Hope Buddah is with you when you hit DC cause Ice Ice Baby maybe waitin for you to shoot to arrest to deport you back to the monostary Ice Ice Baby
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