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Charles2 says: absolute brilliant opening... more? |
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mrmelody7 says: Sir Charles 2 good 2 see you still at it thank you sometimes less is more readers can fill in the blanks but for more seriously listen closely to the lyrics from Freddies Dead by Curtis Mayfield one line says we can deal with rockets and dreams but reality what does it mean aint nothin said cause Freddies dead On my Spring and Summer hiatus from writing |
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Elvan says: Tight very tight, it causes one to think if not deeply it does awaken a desire to think. Exceptionally delivered Mrmelody7. |
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mrmelody7 says: As always thank you Sir |
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LP45 says: You do have a way with words mrmelody7. So much said with so few words. Thanks for sharing. Peace. |
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mrmelody7 says: Tank U Ladypoet45 yeah a quickie I understand people have a short attention span cause I do so I try to get straight to the point try not to write um long |
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2b2b2 says: Petit, Sweet |
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mrmelody7 says: Your comment makes it complete |
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mlowe5 says: Sweet! I hear you Bro. We need to stay on top of things. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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mrmelody7 says: HA HA I like that follow thru >We got to stay on top of things |
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Brownchildt says: Heartfelt and to the point.. I like that. Thank you for sharing. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you as Brother mlowe5 says we gotta stay on top of things |
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mlowe5 says: Sometimes...Flipflopping! |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY mrmelody7
RainAm like Rick James when it comes to rain Im just a sucker for your love That surround sound that get down rain that pit pat sound against the window pane Such a quaint serenity when I hear the rain Got this thing called PTSD it wont let me sleep never believed that stuff bout countin sheep but when it rain I fight the sleep long as I can just to listen to that sweet melody Every time rain will win ease on into a peaceful sleep
There r many many songs about the rain this is an interesting one I saw him in Columbia SC 1984 get this 35 dollar ticket to see him Jimmy Castor Bunch Jeffery Osborne and Anita Baker the main attraction The song is titled In the rain by Orange Juice Jones one hit wonder |
HolidaysHolidays that once so much bought such automatic joy just that euphoric feelin in the air The Mom The Dad all the brothers and sister Just those fond memories For me Holidays can never b the same The love ones that care about you all gathered around A family of unity Those years all the kids grown time has taken Mom and Dad three brothers too Its just not the same when holidays in the air Holidays still somethin bout them just the same To all Happy Holidays to those that are still here to make that call
My favorite Xmas song is Silent Night many have sang it but the Temptains rendition is my favor... |
Dam Its ColdDam its cold all this rain wind and temps floatin in 20s and 30s at night Heatin this house a job with the price of propane gas makin you blink more then twice 100 gal 349 dollars up front 6 weeks repeat the joint Yeah when I was livin up North temps in the teens mountains of snow you heard me make no noise but deep in my years livin in the south winter temps 50s 60s used to it but now and then Brother Hawk swoop on in come around that damp chilled cold goes to the bone got me an outside guy hunking down at home dam whats going on Dam its cold didnt wear my jeans got these light thin dress pants on my my been so long wearing these threads of clothes got me legs freezing wit that wind whippin sure aint pleasin
Nice one by James Taylor featu... |
Just A Video GameAmerica no longer has morals or humanity toward fellow human beings What an administartion talkin bout the one ruling the nation No humanity humans r just a video game Bombing killing folks in boats they acuse of halling drugs well over 80 killed double figure bombings Just blast them out the stratosphere gots the creepy nerve to brag about it showing on all the news programs on TV A video game let them die no one will say anything Its just a video game Love ones dont matter what can they do but become on the dead side of reality in this just a video game I was with the first Cav a lil while in Nam the patch is a big black and yellow with a diagonal stripe with a black horse head Kind of ironic A popular group of the 70s did this song called A Horse With No Name powerful lyrics the group n... |
WritingReally dont get into writing much but I keep at it got to keep Mind Spirit Soul heart all in touch Time now movin so fast as I surpass my elderly years but still I pick up that pen Twilight Zone Atlantis Moon Landing Cut Up in the sky all them thoughts kick in gear Am thinking keep up this writing keep that All Timers at bay dont want it kickin in at any day
I like the Funk groups not much of a balad man But the Isleys got lots of their music alway back to the age of seventeen They r Funk RnB and Ballad My favorite Isley balad is For the love of You it kind of reminds me of writing Now and then I lose my way using words to try to say how I feel You tube got it
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Cant B BoughtCant b bought cant b sold the one thing I set out for my goal Enjoy Freedom of Free Will from birth this was given in my complexities of life made simple in my moments of livin Like birds on the wing cheerful as they wing and sing so I look to the sky and let my Soul soar 2 b free a feelin so good 2 my soul after more then 75 years never was I up for grab 2 b bought or sold
One of my life go to song The God Father sang it years ago stiil resonates with me and thats why I am still laughing at The Big Payback play it regular at the house but you tube got it The Big Payback part one and two James Brown dont do me no darn favor |
A Musical ThanksgivingThankful this day for two of the most favorite people of my life Folks say it takes a village they were a big part of my village for many moons and still R Two songs I will listen too today Thankful N Thoughtful by Sly Be Thankful by Natalie Gottum here but you tube gotutum too Happy Holiday Talented Ones on the VIBE |
Where Have The Poets GoneWhere have the poets gone those with that rhythmic tone Those that spoke of Romantic adventures beneath the sea in Atlantis Your magnificient presence once again please grant us Those who wrote about those down to earth folks those who spoke of Cosmos trips to the darken sky so many adventurous moments in time they did speak Just another cold chill night heater jumpin enjoyin what the poet write Where have the poets gone spread your wings return back home Nice cool night to listen to Poetry Man by Phoebe Snow Queen Latifa also has a lilmore jazzy version also the song Poetry MAn I have both CDs Phoebe and the Queen youtube has it
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Trump The Penny HaterAll you young moms save them pennies for the yougins Soon the penny will b no more null and void U will find few 2025 pennies in your change folks holdin on to um cause its the last year they will b produced They say Lincoln freed the slaves so they made the penny brown to make sure it was in our honor the lowest coin on the totum pole Trump has a dislike of things and people of color tryin to get rid of anythinng Obama accomplished now the penny youre fired
I was a teen durin the British Music invasion of the 60s I always liked the Penny song by the Beatles Penny Lane youtube got it BEatles were ahead of their time and this is just a very early song they got heavier and heavier as time went on
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Property TaxTake your money whenver they can or wanna People never know what going on man get your money name of the game Them plus tax folk aint no joke but its not funny how they just take your money Top of that nothin U can say or do except pay when they say its due Why should U have to pay tax on land and house U own then as U sleep sometime or another done raised my property tax 60 percent Dam Banks Government Electric companies everybody crooks nice present for Thanksgiving they make sure your goose is cooked
Got it at the house but youtube got it so mad gonna take on the Temptations Its The Law Of The Land as they say wheather U like it or understand
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