mrmelody7
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CATEGORY
life
Liken that cold nip
on the face
Nice crisp Winter feel
like day
Gusty winds as I sit in
my truck (at The lake) come
through the open windows
with that frigid slap
take that.
The sound of the gushy white
cap rollin waves
captivate my senses
Just that nice frigid slap
in the face Winter gettin
near
Them sexy trees thowin
off the leaves
them sexy limbs reveal
yes indeed that frigid slap
is for real
Winter close thats the deal
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mlowe5 says: A beautiful sensory pen. Great imagery. Felt that frigid slap to the face as my eyes caressed those sexy trees. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much my time of year late gettin my fire barrel know that you are a lover of them sexy trees too |
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mlowe5 says: One! Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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LP45 says: Great write mrmelody7, Definitely on point with this one. I like everyone else has felt that slap more than once. I don't care too much for the cold weather, but it's okay sometimes. Thanks for sharing. Peace. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Ladypoet45 yeah gets cold in northeast I like brisk walks n the cold like shovelin snow too what they call cold in SC is nothin compared |
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DOLISHA DEVONNE says: YOU ARE DEFINITELY ON POINT WHEN DESCRIBING THIS WINTER, IT REALLY HAS BEEN A SLAP TO THE FACE. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Dolisha I must say your poetry is always on point |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Dolisha I must say your poetry is always on point |
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