I sit beside a shadow
looking at its reflection
through the gaze of light
staring back at me
I am not the who I am
I am the who I see
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The Immortal Wize
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I sit beside a shadow
looking at its reflection
through the gaze of light
staring back at me
I am not the who I am
I am the who I see
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COMMENTS
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mlowe5 says: Yes, I feel you, Poet Wize: that shadow reflecting the me that I see that I am...which is me. Sweet flowing melodic write of rhythmic introspection. Peace and love, mlowe. |
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RonnieL says: Yasssss! Deep reflection piece. U got it nice. |
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