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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Tender Touch

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I need to go I can't walk away I can't stand to see you struggling to pull yourself up if I give you my hand to hold can you promise you won't pull me down if I let go can you promise me you can stand on your own I can stay for awhile but all you need is to be alone love let's go love don't always hold on I know you can do this on your own I'll be in the stands cheering you on from the depth of my heart you will always be in my deepest thought close enough to touch though we've part ways these feelings won't change I still feel the same and I don't blame you for a thing that went wrong between us here take my hand let me help you up both of us need a touch of trust

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Wise_Notion says:

That's tough...fire...thanks for sharing

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mlowe5 says:

A beautiful "tender touch" with strong words of "tough" love distinguishing itself from simply, "being-in-love". Peace, Love, and Trust.

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