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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Discoloration

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deeply damaged from a rose that struck and stuck like prickles on a endangered porcupine painful to hold too bloody stunning to let go thorns sunk depression into the essence of the beholder of beauty like teeth marks from a human fluid sucking mosscitto stung by the bee protecting the royal jelly from the sticky mitts of the smitten honey dripping thief caught in a strange situation of little explanation upon which evergreen is nevermore as if rain had never poured like skies had never cried before all the trees in the forest sun dried and died not one tear left to fall from a weeping eye much too late in the day for summer to touch the sky a child waits for Christmas time eyes all aglow to see shine the heart knows what it needs longing to hear the bells ring it grieves feeling peltings of fallen acorns born from the mighty oak escaping obvious odious feelings of shackled loneliness an enchanted pore of infection through out the feverish region marked with decease disease memories in a sea of bones bandaged to mask scars within scars within scars stories upon stories told of war time crimes against mankind effortlessly the beat continues nevermind it's only a test 11 out of 100 is an extraordinary score do your best regardless the curriculum of current odessies watch the movie it's too many books to read on the neverending infinity times infinity walking fingers ripping pages editing lacerations because paper cuts it takes time for curiosity to totally mend tears

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mlowe5 says:

Yes Sir! Heard loud and clear! Indeed, in the midst of this present mystic discoloration of the times, "...it takes time for curiosity to totally mend tears..." and the "errors" from whence they have been allowed to flow from. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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