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LP45
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lightness in the dark
Hey there my fellow poets! Blessings and greetings to you all for a prosperous new year. Life has been pretty rough for me since I last posted but nonetheless, as always with God's mercy and grace I've persevered. I'm finally at a point where I can start posting again. I so miss being on here and reading everyone's works. I hope that everything is going well for everyone. Let's keep the inklove flowing!

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long distance

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She awakened from her slumber

To morning’s callings,

Her first thought was of him.

Groggily she puts on her glasses,

Checking the time as

Her immediate surroundings

Come into focus making

The thought of him

All the more clearer.

Wondering what he’d be doing,

Her brain fog hadn’t

Fully dissipated until his message

Came through greeting her

With well wishes and hopes

For a beautiful day.

Then she realized

That it was Saturday

The Sabbath for him.

His message came with a scripture

She pondered a few moments,

And then smiled.

Was she his first thought upon

Waking up that morning

As he was hers?

She’ll probably never know.

Was she his last thought before

Closing his eyes the previous night

As he was hers?

She’ll probably never know.

Or was the strength of their bond

So much so that the spiritual

Connection within their souls

Was unknowingly summoned and

Were each other’s first

And last thoughts?

That is quite possible but she’ll

Probably never know for sure.

What she does know and

Will always remember is

The way she felt upon waking up.

Her first thought was of him,

And it made her smile.

Her last thought was of him

Before bed the previous night.

And as she read his message.

To her, she was his first thought

As he was hers when she awakened

His words were genuine yet simple

And touched her heart like a

Forehead kiss touches the soul.

There is no greater feeling.

 

LP45 2/27

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Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

I read this as if there was music playing in the background, I must say I love this song.❤️
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, LP45! Spiritually powerful! Perpendicular enlightening first thoughts. Thanks again; I needed this. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.
 

LP45 says:

Thank you Wize for your kind words and thank you Mlowe5 for your support. Peace and blessings to you both.

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Capture, Cinematic Conveyance....Bravo...thank you for sharing your gift in thought and verse!

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LP45 says:

Thank you for your support 2B.

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