The Immortal Wize

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It's All Behind You

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when your backs against

the wall it seems there's

no way to escape it seems

like a troubling difficult

situation but it also

can serve as a place

of solution it can give one

time to realize causing

one to think of ways to

defend the impending

knowing something is

plainly drawing near

do not be afraid to put

your back against the

wall to see what's coming

toward you the wall has

nothing against you

what can sneak up

behind you focused

on what's in front you

is an advantage point

so put your back into it

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		Sassy says: I like this, the metaphor of the wall being. a bad place when actually it can be a place for lessons. Strength and courage to you poems by this commentor A Father Fallen Newcastle BYE MA HI MA
		mlowe5 says: Indeed, I tend to agree with Sassy; yet I've also discovered that the wall is also in a position to both push you forward and if it breaks, it could also betray and pull you back. Nice write, Wize. A great thought-provoking metaphor, indeed. Peace and Love, mlowe5. poems by this commentor STUNNED King Day Journeying On