looking outwardly from inside into a early morning sky can't help but see it in the clear like a sparkly diamond in a jar it's always on fire it never tires it shines in a class of its own I think to myself by far it must be quite lonely to be one of the brightest star in force on Mars
The Immortal Wize
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Lovely
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2b2b2 says: Reflection is Edifying...and quite Lovely....ONE |
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mlowe5 says: Indeed! yet, how fulfilling it must be sharing such beautiful lovely shinning for all of us to see! Peace and Love, |
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LP45 says: Very nice. I liked this. In fact, the title is befitting |
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