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lightness in the dark
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leaving Los Angeles headed for

Victorville is one hell of a climb

up a hill feels like Jesus took the wheel

floating through the air on wheels

stuck on cruise control 

between San Bernardino 

in southern California 

on a dangerous road too

cloudy to see up ahead of me 

nothing to guide me but 

tail lights out in front of me 

told everyone about the

exhilarating  experience 

they laughed and made fun 

of the spiritual awakening 

I grew in church on old time

religion then got too grown for

my britches tore out to make

my own decisions now I

I believe what I believe 

not all I been told to believe

 by those who chose to believe 

what they were told to believe

 I once believed in a Easter 

bunny and and a old white man

called Santa Clause too now 

when it comes to my soul I'm 

the keeper of my own truth 

living in water breathing under

water living on water wading 

in the water can't burn fire with 

fire clouds on the ground bursting

 like water balloons woke up in 

Apple Valley now I see clear to 

the moon on top of a mountain

3,777 feet of elevation the 

closest I'll ever get to heaven on the

ground rolled down the window

touch sky don't need wings to fly

I'll be there some time in 

the morning or some time

Sunday evening or Sunday night

unsure of the exact time on the clock

until then I'll be sailing on the map  



 

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mlowe5 says:

Beautiful. Indeed, "...we must be the keepers of our own truth..." The ride took me back some years ago when we drove (me the truck; she the car) from LA to here in VA (just outside of Richmond). Be safe. ONE. Peace and Love.

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