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“What happens when a star loses it’s shine”

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“What happens when a star loses it’s shine”

What happens when a star loses its shine?

It falls from the sky and as it falls its
asking the question.

Why me?
Why?

With rattled thoughts jumping in and out of
there mind.

What happens when a star loses its shine?

They are bereft of words, tears start to
release and anger kicks in because of the
feeling of grief.

Still asking the question…

Why me?
Why?

What happens when a star loses its shine?

It falls from the sky not ready or willing to die.


Naz'e  06/10/2000

“What happens when a star loses it’s shine”

What happens when a star loses its shine?

It falls from the sky and as it falls its
asking the question.

Why me?
Why?

With rattled thoughts jumping in and out of
there mind.

What happens when a star loses its shine?

They are bereft of words, tears start to
release and anger kicks in because of the
feeling of grief.

Still asking the question…

Why me?
Why?

What happens when a star loses its shine?

It falls from the sky not ready or willing to die.


Naz'e  06/10/2000

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Contest Winner  

mlowe5 says:

For every "shooting star", we must work to ensure the birth of another. Peace and Love.

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naze00011 says:

mlowe5 - I am encouraged by your words and food for thought. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem.
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mlowe5 says:

ONE. Peace and Love.

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