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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Eternal Dance of Fire

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I don't want you dancing for anyone else but me

I know I can't really demand that from you

Because that's what you do when doing you

I know it’s much more to the way score

You say it’s the way you move and converse

I know why you're tired and why you hurt

One night of work dancing the dance of seduction

A dance of so much shame

You can't dance it under your own name

Burning your Eternal flames

Herod was so pleased he had a man beheaded

That’s why when you dance you dread it

Through me you were able to live out  your fantasies

How you wanted to live and life to be

How you wished it would be just you and me

How could I   stand the heat boiling inside of me

The rein of pleasure and pain feeling  inflammable

Remembering the first time you danced for me

Something I never wanted to see but could not look away

I will never forget the day Eternal danced for me

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love_supreme says:

I really liked this poem. Excellent write.

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