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life 1 min read 348 views Feb 4, 2026

My 8-year-old mind

In the night 

My 8 year old mind

Measures the distance from this

Bunk bed space ship to momma's bedroom door in miles

In the night

My 8 year old mind

Steals away to that place far away from now

Now the furniture is moving in my momma's room

The walls yell and scream

I told my 8 year old mind not to cry

I told my 8 year old mind to be brave

I'm going fly my bunk bed space ship far away

Far away from the night

The walls are yelling again

Momma's voice sounds bruised

Behind her bedroom door her hurt became contagious

It crept under my door and crawled inside my 8 year old mind

The night echoes inside my 56 year old mind

Fly away

I will fly away someday....

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Charles2

We have within our spirit minds, movies of our lives which play tricks on us. Providing friction, which when applied to problems we can fix. Gives us wings to perform miracles. If, not.. creates nightmares. Great share!

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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Coalhouse

Thank you poets

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love_supreme

Very nice

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