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Pretty-Please

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Pretty please, may I hold you tight?

That was me giving a compliment

and being polite in one breath.

Should I say it with my chest?

PRETTY PLEASE!

I'd give anything to have your lungs

breathe down my neck forever.

Let's face it, forget the endeavor,

you wouldn't want this to end—ever.

PRETTY PLEASE!

May I hold you like the night?

Be who you dream about when

I'm right there chasing your

nightmares?

Awake beside you to be your truth

when most of your life is not fair.

PRETTY PLEASE!


—JG

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ThePoetess says:

very beautifully written,"forget the endeavor, you wouldn't want this to end—ever." Nice!!
 

Hebrew King says:

Thank you Poetess! Be blessed.

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