mrmelody7
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CATEGORY
life
She is slowly
but surly
slowin me down
stopping my runnin around
Just hangin out with
the fellas
does no good
when I tella
Finding ways to
keep me close
Spoilin me silly
when I just
wanna be
just chillin
Caught in her noose
she not turnin me loose
Slowly she is numbering
my days
when
only I wanted out of life
was to play
Slowly but surly she is
doing it her own
very own subtle way
Slowly
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COMMENTS
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2b2b2 says: Being caught up or allowing ourselves to be caught sometime can be a good thing! |
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mrmelody7 says: Nothin like the chase different when the hunter get captured by the game |
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<3 says: I like this!! 2b2b2 is right sometimes its a good thing!! :) |
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Poteic Justice says: im feeling this :) |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Lady heart I agree with the both of you sometimes its a good thing |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you Poetic Justice your user name would make a good title for this |
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NternallyMe says: Interesting and thought provoking!! I love this one!! thanks for sharing! Chea |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you again for the read and comment, I am a free spirited guy and I really hate when someone is tryin to spoil me, but when they don't give up its just crazy |
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NternallyMe says: Nothing wrong with being a little spoiled, it's when people stop paying attention to you that you need to be concern.. |
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mrmelody7 says: Hard being popular, people know me from playing sports, especially basketball, and people love the music I listen too, between the partying and clubbing, I just love livin in the boonies now as long as you got transportation to get out when you want |
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kingqadardwon' says: Nice, steady flow |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much King |
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love_supreme says: Very nice flow! |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much latin_lover |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: Very Nice!!! |
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