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Just_zeek
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 I'm still here, are you surprised to see me?, if I went back and told my old self i'd never believe me, its kind of funny how i rose when they said id never bloom, far from rich but my mind's worth a pharaoh's tomb, never was a fool but b.s.'d my way through school , got to college and thought reefer would help make me cool, gained some friends,  lost my balance, almost lost my mind, my girl even left I think we just got lost in time, bad habits had me stuck til I got lost in rhymes, words help me set free all of the pain inside, painting pictures with each line depending on how I feel,  producing a high better than any drug could ever give, I take my pen and focus try to produce the dopest, everyday I'm getting better and growing more potent, I ain't perfect but I feel my vices dying slowly, couldn't tell you where I'm going but hopefully God can show me....

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Royale Jones says:

damn! man you can write bruh. love the rhyme scheme keep them coming
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The Immortal Wize says:

This is awesome, you killed it homie.

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Just_zeek says:

Thanks Royale Jones and Wize Dom, glad y'all liked it!!
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2b2b2 says:

Outstanding Flow-ful Reflection.....Respect....ONE

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