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tretre
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"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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His silent emotions

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    Cradled within the steel bars erected by the white man dirty red clumps of caked blood sticking to  the calloused skin on your brow. Naked, your beautiful black body gleaming beneath the dim yellow light in your dark dank painfully cold smelly hole- your cell. Bruises invisible, face empty of emotion, You lie there defeated, dying-lungs barely haveing out and filling. Air still, night pitch black. Heat pumping in slow agonizing beats, skin icy on gravelly stone beaten bones awkwardly protruding from beaneath you life leaking out through your slightly parted  swollen brown lips white of teeth almost showing. eyes closed inflamed by the impact- white knuckles on slippery soft cornea. face downturned, I can see goose bumps on your shining form- tiny bumps all over you  like some festering diseaes not moving life oozing out your abused black body. The spirit and raw passion of your anger gushing forth  to empower me.                                                

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thebookofspells says:

powerful stuff...makes you uncomfortable in that advanced verbal prowess kind of way

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