tretre
 66300 1 
|
|||||||||||||||||||||
CATEGORY
life
Everyone has a potentially essential boat
on this river called life.
Only some of us,
Make it to the sea.
Some drown themselves
With antagonism and masochism.
Others are drowned;
Some as a result of bitter revenge,
Some as a result of innocent blunders.
The slect few who survive
Are generally bitter and resentful
Because of artificial strength
Forced into their character
By abusive memories.
So, what is better?
A gruesome demise
Or a merciless existence?
You must be registered to leave a comment. Registration is FREE.
COMMENTS
|
The Immortal Wize says: From a poetic point of view the personalities split into the rhetorical question. I truly love your work |
||
sonofsun5211 says: the ultimatum..... ugh... |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY tretre
|
Demon Time: Anger, frustration, temptation, and greed, faced with uncertianty, in time of need, Bullets wi...  |
|
The Intruder I sit here tonight at my window watching the rain fall swiftly, knowing once it was ... |
|
Passion Poem#6 I waited at the entrance of the front door, as he slowly opened the it, I smil... |
|
Passion Poem#5 Take A Look He took me by the hand, pass the living room, pass the kitchen, to the bedroom mirror is his miss... |
|
Sleeping Beauty: As I lay here and watch you sleep...a deep calm feeling rushes right through me, a smile I releas... |
|
Today Is The Day: Today is the day I begin to see, the beauty that's hidden deep within me, stopping the focus on w... |
|
Musically In Tune: He sat near the window, the curtains blowing in the breeze, The sound of soft music played, as hi... |
|
YOUTH Our youth today are affected, unloved, and unprotected...The voices of their parents echoes...yel... |
|
PASSION POEM#5: A DANCE OF UNDERSTANDING His hands on my hips...anxiety sets in, My mind confused, I can't...it's not... |
|
Your Secret Crush#3 So it's been awhile since I've seen you, |
