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Really was I ever trusted without the suspicion,

Very few loved me without the conditions

And if you really know me oh so intimately

Then how the *** could you offer so much unhealthy criticism, about my life and all my critical decisions

How could you love me, honestly, despite all your cynicism

Our norm is such a contradiction, I'm trying to move forward and all you see is the sickest visions

Of where we're supposed to be, how can I be positive when you're so pessimistic

I see life for the gift its given, I gave you me with my best intentions

I took advantage of what you took for granted

That's our biggest difference.

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