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The Immortal Wize

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It hurts to cry

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You left and I was grieving

They told me you were gone

I didn’t believe it

That couldn’t have been

Your blood on the cement

The same day we had a disagreement

The same day you told me you were leaving

The day I saw your mother crying

I knew it was true they weren’t lying

I had to cry in the rain to hide my pain

I know you’re in heaven

Coz you don’t owe the devil

A got damn thing

You were good and I was bad

I was an outcast

You were all that I had

Now I’m down to nothing

Feeling bad about the things I said

I didn’t mean it

 It was out of meanness

I cry a little it hurts a lot

I was sleep when I heard the shots

I salute you

You were a true troop

Unlike those bullets that hit you

I will miss you

 

 

 

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msmaja187 says:

💔 I felt it

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hymnagen says:

Sobering words that make you appreciate the living. Know your presence here is appreciated Wize Dom. Powerful scribe. Peace
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2b2b2 says:

Heartwrenching yet beautifully captured....thanks Wize...ONE
 

catmartan says:

Heartwarming Piece Be Encouraged !

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