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Broken Souls

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Two broken souls colliding Emerging forcefully trying to not emerge where their souls should meet In fear that they will make each other whole and therefore complete. under each other spell they wish each other well Dumping all their hopes and dreams in a wishing well But never wasting it on each other As they run their own course of course Running never stopping to reach a conclusion so deep in thought under the illusion That the faster they go Leaves no time for I love yous or Discourses of mourning when they leave each other in the morning Early morning... booty calls But no gains as they crawl to their Courses of how to love Bugs them, the distant memories creeps on them Like roaches they lay eggs in their head Hatching thoughts of lonieness causing them to Merge again but never submerging under Their feelings of endorphins Because they both know that when it leaves Them it leaves them with themselves And they can't face the self hate They regurutated on the scene of the crime the scenes that of their lives. Always the first to leave Never wearing a heart or their sleeves... Lonely and afraid Their love lost left stains It remains embedded in their heads They can't get it off their temple Their inability to let go Leaves them in a never ending cycle Their soul on E They go searching for more Than what they are willing to give And they relive this harsh reality With every body... They bodied leaving behind more broken souls That impose on their thoughts Their thoughts are the same As they go on trying to play this game That they lost from the start.

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twistedbeauty says:

love it

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Tali says:

Great poem!

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recklessmonet says:

Thank you so much. It encourages me to keep writing.

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2b2b2 says:

OUTSTANDING....BRAVO....helluva capture!!
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recklessmonet says:

Thanks 2b
 

bricakes05 says:

Beautiful

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recklessmonet says:

Thanks for the feedback.

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DallasCowgirl says:

Captivating

 

love_supreme says:

This poem is very moving. Excellent write.

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Ghostwriter716 says:

THIS POEM CAPTIVATED MY MIND YOUR TALENT IS IMPECCABLE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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