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life
I waded in her waters.
I should have stood
at waters’ edge;
used my head
and better judgment
of her current,
but instead
I skinny-dipped
in her torrents.
Got carried away
by her rapids.
Struggled with her
to release me.
She obliged;
left me lying beside her
Soaking wet,
breathless and tired.
Next season believing
I spied her new tributary
and my reflection
on its surface –
reminding me
that water has purpose,
the least of which,
to sate my need to swim.
-HymnAgen
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KingQadarDwon' says: ,Straight lava🌋 bro.. Keep up the outstanding work... |
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DallasCowgirl says: HymnAgen, your poetic artistry is timeless. Your words are as ancient diaries excavated by nosy but pardoned archeologists who only seek to understand the beautiful talents that unfolded in time's His-Story. |
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hymnagen says: KingQadarDwon' thank you brotha for being a wellspring of encouragement! |
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hymnagen says: UnderHisWings7 woman you're trying to make me blush purple! LOL You keep me in great company. Deep appreciation 4U. #Respect |
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Ak rio says: Its not just what you said but how you said it, great rhyme schemes these could be lyrics |
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hymnagen says: Ak rio...#Respect! Your comments matter. Thanks! |
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bluedichotomy says: Very nice |
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hymnagen says: bluedichotomy, I thank you for reading it! |
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The Immortal Wize says: This is so, breathtaking, it's like the words just melt in your mouth. There is no other way of saying it...Awesome |
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hymnagen says: Wize Dom you are most gracious with this comment! Mad respect for you. Thanks |
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