mrmelody7
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CATEGORY
life
Watchin the ripple of the ocean
bob in and out
Its like live creation in motion
without a doubt
So I am comteplating on this
fishin trip
if only I can get this mermaid
that would be rea hip
Ocean cuttin up wildly what else
can I say
Fantasy? maybe but my mermaid
still has not come my way
Oh thats right porgies and sea bass
thats what we are
fishin for
They came not my way today
and my beautiful mermaid
I will never give up
on her
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The Immortal Wize says: This is a real nice fishy flow! |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much Wize Dom, fishin 200ft deep, never know whats comin up out that water |
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BoRhyme says: Yes, I love creative stuff like this!!!! I truly love this! |
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mrmelody7 says: thank you much BoRhyme |
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2b2b2 says: Great piece....got me wondering....what if....the mermaid looks like a porgie or sea bass....lol.....ONE |
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mrmelody7 says: Thanks much 2b, no no Mermaid much to rare last time I went deep sea fishin caught 55 porgies a seas robin and five sea bass |
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