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love_supreme
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lightness in the dark
We will make it through this. Believe that.

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You really should not start her down the path unless you plan to take her all the way, she has waited her whole life for this feeling and in that instant--

time stops and there is nothing left for her but that feeling. If you look in her eyes, you could almost see the universe bending and twisting to her thoughts with her eyes closed and an unending rhythm of creating life within her. 

Not the life of a child, but a life. She wants to understand how you move and help you move the world and all she has are these feelings. --

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Poetunleashed says:

Beautiful piece
 

Woven says:

Whew... This was such an oh so spot on expression. Why lead those feelings to a dead end. Awesome scribe!

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Very deep!! Beautiful write

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