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A thing Decreed

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Receiving revelations in a cave,

words of love and light penetrated his being,

 With quivering lips and a shivering heart, trembling legs and dancing pupils.

He was obligated with the mission as The love messenger

to deliver a clear message.

A thing Decreed from his Lord.

The daunting and dreadful task of reciting the emotional and monumental "I love you" to the one whom he was sent to rattle the strings of her heart and to shake the mountains therein.

A thing decreed.

A thing predestined.

A thing ordained.

A test on earth.

The ultimate respect.

From the Oasis of the desert and skipping over the hot sands of the east, he had to cross holy streams and sacred rivers, just so that they can meet.

Sending divine warnings to anyone that would oppose his Divine message, he was to only deliver poetry and not to spill in prose.

He was sent to perform spoken verbs, only for her ears as she was instructed to soak up his words.

She was asked by him to record everything and to carefully and strategically put it all together to create a new book of proverbs, that the world will still read 2,000 years from now.

They have set out to become the new Ancients with a new narrative,

Not promoting 700 wives and 300 concubines,

but teaching how to love 1 wife over 700 ways and listing over 300 other ways to make her smile,

And bask in eternal bliss here on earth.

              Qadar Dwon'

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LP45 says:

Awesome write QD! Just the way its supposed to be. Thank you for sharing this.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Ladypoet45 Thank you so much! I appreciate you vibing with me... sending Much love and light your way..💞💫🌞
 

mrmelody7 says:

Receiving revelations in a cave what a beginning got me visualizing a national geographic show back in ancient times and your descriptive journey quite fascinating King
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Mrmelody7... Thank you my brother! Something hit me and told me to put something together and post something for the vibe.. I'm glad that I did.. It made and transformed my night.. I haven't been too inspired lately, focusing on all of these evil world events taking place before our eyes that will affect the future in a major way... Always honored by your feedback, sending you peace, light, love, power, and creativity my brother..
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mlowe5 says:

A well penned message my Brother. Always inspiring to hear from you. Know that we poets know that revelations are not spontaneous; but are the results of the birthing process of the pregnant poetic mind. Peace, Love and Unity; and may The Most High Continue to be with you, Keep your "...eyes watching God." Much respect to you, mlowe5
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The Immortal Wize says:

Yes indeed, truth coming out of the darkness into the light of man. Love it!
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alexiscoon4135 says:

This is so beautifully written, I had to whisper the words aloud! Thank you for sharing this!

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RonnieL says:

Your art....spell bound me. This is a unique write fam. salute your talent.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Mlowe5 thank you sir!!! I'm trying to put in that work to get on your level... You're definitely my Poetic mentor that keeps me motivated... I appreciate all of your feedback, every consonant and every vowel...
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Wizedom Thank you so much Poetry Guru!!! Always honored by your presence and feedback!
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Alexiscoon4135 Thank you so much for enjoying my work.. Definitely humbled by your comment..
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@RonnieL... My brother! Thank you so much sir! I'm in awe of your art as well! The sincerity and originality allows you to consistently produce Gems...
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Corey says:

Beautiful expression!!
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Corey Thank you so much... I appreciate the vibes.. Thanks for reading..
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2b2b2 says:

Awesomely Inspired Write....thanks for sharing!

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