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thatygpoetickidd
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lightness in the dark
wonder if i should free write

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You need a real man

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romance

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You deserve the best and that's all I've been try to accomplish you deserve the best man the best kiss the best smile it could all be so bliss you deserve the best touch the best affection the best care anything that's best for you i believe you deserve it you've been in and out your comfort zone don't act like i haven't noticed when you're without the things and love that you need you seem to got timed whenever you're sad i picture a blunt in your hands and then i picture your other hand holding down your head as if you're tired as if you're saying you're tired and you're done if i may I'd like to give you a hug and hold your head up to let you know we could be closer then bonny and Clyde i see you as a potential ride or die nah i take that bacc you'll never die the love you have and the heart your carry is something that will be carried on for sentries to come i want other people to be able to look at us and be inspired yeah you have a lot of baggage well let me carry your bags it's so sad when someone so beautiful  is affected by lies and the confusion that others placed....

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DallasCowgirl says:

Keep freestyling, brother! This is pure. Good work.

 

twistedbeauty says:

nice write... i enjoyed reading it

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