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life 1 min read 666 views Feb 5, 2017

A Violent Space (revised)


Looking out my window

Pained
Upon a violent space

Observing sullen souls
Abstracted against the madness
Society's masterpiece composed in blood

A daunting delineation of
The craziness associated
With physical existence
Insistent upon their destruction

Violent faces consumed in violent places
Unforgiving of yesterday

Misconceived pawns in a game
Of imminent annihilation
And I
My life
A mere speck within
The infinity of time
An atom amongst atoms
Blowing in the wind

ABRUPTLY BASED UPON A VIOLENT SPACE!

An unknown entity
Ejaculated by society
Emulating
The inner mechanics of that which I came

Driven by insanity
Stimulated by a turbulence unseen

I, a product of my society
Prostituted by puppeteers
Manipulating my Actions into
Capitalistic gains

Bloodsucking maggots in the heat of passion
Feeding off my soul

For I am!
Society's masterpiece

More precious than gold

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LP45

Nice work. Dig the flow. Thank you for sharing this.

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Odonko-ba

Thank you Poetess

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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