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of creatures of god...

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lobsters are

god given creatures

often boiled alive

for purposes

given by the creator…

 

you too

are one of his

given creatures

but unlike

the crustacean

he gave you choices

in created purposes:

 

you can choose

to boil alive

in waters

of depression

or to warmly glow

in the sunshine

of the waters of life…

 

so wade in the water

child—wade

and

be not afraid—

god not only troubles

the water

but

also gives it peace

and ripples of love:

 

remember—

you have choices…

 

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Tali says:

This speaks to me, in so many ways. Thank you .

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mlowe5 says:

Your are welcome Tali_sosweet. Continue to choose to bless us with your gifted poetic mind. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

minayaJ says:

Thank you this I felt hit me in way unimaginable. Great write. Again thank you.

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LP45 says:

True wisdom Mlowe5 and an excellent write as well. We're free to make any choice in life we want we're just not free from the consequences of those choices. This is said with the hopes that those who may no believe they have a choice, do ind also realize that we were made with and for a purpose. Thank you for sharing this. Peace and blessings my friend.
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mlowe5 says:

minayaJ, I am pleased that this write came through for you. Thanks for the read and feedback. Keep on Keeping on and always choosing to be the blessed you that you are. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Ladypoet45, thank you and blessings be upon you. Just try to let our youth know that they have choices and must realize that though their present sufferings may indeed be great, such sufferings are minuscule when compared to the blessings of God and the foundation laid by our Ancestors. Your feedback has given me much encouragement to futher development of this poetic message. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, love_supreme. We are indeed creatures of God. Thanks for the SNAPS. Peace and Love.

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