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minayaJ
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Enclosed Mind

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My mind is in a cloud state Not even Foggy days feel like they can compensate The loud noises in my mind that feel like cable wires intertwined Thought pop off like buried mines Hidden in the depth of my mental state Sometimes I want to go to the highest mountain and release all this anger and hate Maybe not being heard but Definitely on another level of this mind game so I can concentrate. Or think straight? Is that even a thing we're our minds wander enclosed in a crate. We all stay silent about the heavy weight. To meditate is to feel great

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Pat says:

after foggy days dissipate a bright light will shine your way.

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mlowe5 says:

The "enclosed mind" must be set free; thus then, ao are you to contemplate the divine wisdom and guidance that comes your way. ONE. Peace and Love.
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2b2b2 says:

Tight Write....well played...ONE

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TEEDUB815 says:

Nice Write "Enclosed Mnid"
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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