mrmelody7
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life
If I could I would bring the moon to your
feet
If I could I would render the galaxy to
you with a front row seat
If I could I would scoop you up with the
Big Dipper and bring to you Cinderella
magical slipper
If I could I would bring to you the brightest star so the world could reflect how beautiful you areIf I could I would take you away to Venus
for without you life to me is meaningless
If I could I would
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COMMENTS
<3 says: Love this one..lots of good feelings. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much, in my haste I left out the next to last stanza If I could I would bring to you the brightest star so the world can reflect on how beautiful you are, Thank you for the read and lovely comment |
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PeaceSearcher says: I love this one especially because the moon and the galaxy is such an interest to me, so wrapping up love in there is magnificent |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you for your kind words PeaceSearcher, majority what I write deals with the cosmos or nature, winter season when I write when I cant get out and about like I want, gives me something to do. I believe you have to go out and experience life then take time to reflect on it, gives you plenty of things to write about |
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Devonte7638 says: I can vibe with this. I love and sometimes write poems like this. Great job! |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much when I do write I like variety so I go into many things thanks again |
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minayaJ says: Clapping....As well to the blogs...Good one my friend. |
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mrmelody7 says: Thank you much for the applause and comment have always heard if is the biggest word in the dictionary |
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