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Ex-Boyfriend

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 There once was a flame which shone so bright,

A flame which said everything would be alright.

This flame it shone for elevn happy y ears, 

Until one day last week when it all ended in tears.

These tears that were shed, were  shed only by me,

I swear all you cared about was finally being free.

Last year was great, we had a real blast,

I didnt know it then, but those happy times were our last.

You wrote me something last year, and i  hope i quote you right,

You told me "I think it is really cool that we never fight".

If only you could have listended to your own little phrase, 

You and me together could have had many more wonderful days

I dont think I'll ever again accept you as my friend,

I'm actually glad the whole thing found an end.

You hurt me more than you will every know, 

And I'll bet  all you can say is.........."well things come and go".

Now there is only one thing left for me to do,

And that is starting over with a better friend then you.

I dont want you to worry your ruthles little face,

I already have a new friend standing in your place.

 

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DreamPoet says:

Did this happen to you? if it did that would be a shame. I really liked how you, use your words. Another great poem.

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tretre says:

Lol...No DreamPoet this did not happen to me. Most of my poems, are about people i know. This happends to be one of them. Thanks for taking the time to read this poem. Keep that pen movin!

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The Immortal Wize says:

I'm too gangsta to cry but this is very touching. and you are a great poet.

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T'ya says:

It's cool to take a person's story and give it life in ur own words. Very nice pen
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tretre says:

Thank you T'ya, The world is full of inspiration for poetry. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Keep that pen movin!

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TamaraD says:

yea yea yea that was HOTT i have been there its so much better with a new love awesome indeed

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