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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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Dragon Blood ~ (for those who fight and fought valiantly for their country to come home and find that the doors are shut and locked)

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 he sits on the edge of the world

unconcerned with the

dissimulation of

polite society

busy little bee's

bouncing off reality

living the dream he so valiantly fought to protect

he sits there quietly

saturated in urine

manufactured of white port fueled by memory of war

contemplating nothing

invisible to most

but still

a blight upon their sensibilities and

a horrid fright to the eyes when seen

cold hungry and shivering

they could give a siht as to his welfare

they cogitate his insanity

his own undoings

and that smell

the smell of death

lurking waiting to pounce

on yet another of society's outcast

putid sores cover flesh uncovered

where gnats and flies feast

and maggots dine beneath the skin and

his breath

his breath smells of dragon blood

do we even know what dragon blood is?

apparently he does

two tours in Vietnam and a purple heart for bravery

yet he sits on the edge of the world

bravely trampled under foot of apathy

absent of coalition

he wishes only to be left alone

to dance in the pain of degredation

and waltz in the face of death

until God calls him to reckoning

he will sit there on the edge of the world

listening to

the mundane idiocrasy of those who wander by

left to his own maundering

invisible that is

until the olympics come to town.

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love_supreme says:

Wow, this poem is a powerful statement.

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mrmelody7 says:

Solid truth, if you know any vets in need of help for applying for benefits, a good start are the Vet Center located in most large cities

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2b2b2 says:

Outstanding Capture.....PTSD is what they call it now....but before that it was also known as heartbroken or broke spirit....well done! ONE

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odonko-ba says:

the olympics are coming to Rio i wonder what will happen to those they consider a blight upon society...thank you my brothers for feeling this. Peace!...Odonko-ba

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