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life 1 min read 525 views May 27, 2014

Dear Pops pt1

 

This one is kinda hard for me.... January 17th your dream killed your seed

  Forgotten in your mystery, you are less than a dream.... Personality traits that bare your ***ing image

Standing next to my mother I see the perfect distance Between me and your seeds, I see no ***ing difference

What did I do to you to not deserve your presence

But in hindsight your absence served as a perfect blessing

Look at me now and you deserve no credit

10 yrs from now I'll be a living legend

Part of me is great in spite of you

No longer have the urge to fight with you

Just sit and talk about a life we never knew

Maybe give you a chance to make things right - start

anew

Working on forgiveness but this plight is brand new

But to just completely overlook what you've done is something I can't do

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2b2b2

Poignant Share...real sharp, this cuts!!! Namaste

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tretre

I hope you don't mind me sharing this...I know more then a few people who can relate to this poem. Beautiful work Sincere. Keep that pen movin!

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sincere

No I don't mind

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love_supreme

Very nice

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