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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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How can I get you to understand?

Hold out your hand so I can put

Something in it, no you can’t spend it

Yes you can fold it, on paper I wrote it

Hoping you would read it, so that I won’t

Have to repeat it any time soon

Underline and highlight what stands out

To you

These words that I give to you

If only you knew how long it took

For me to do

I almost gave up trying to

Turning my back on loving you

I’ve been working on forgiving you

Something that I find damn hard to do

Putting my heart on notice

To be careful not to beat for you

 

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tretre says:

I'm in love with this poem....This poem hit my heart for some reason. Maybe because it's something I would also write. It's poetry like this that captures my heart. Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful piece. I'm sharing this one. I hope you don't mind. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!!!

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