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PoeticallyGifted
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been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".

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Perspective

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i see a lot of beauty from this perspective

my feelings towards you are relentless

the view is astonishing 

you disrupt my train of thought

im speechless and left in awe

words dont come out, and theres things i havent spoken

lets make a strong connection in our adolescence

be my partner on my search for for peace and truth

cause real talk a lot of my recurring thoughts are about you

damn Bonnie you're a beautiful

im a truth seeker, truth speaker, admirer of your inner and outer beauty

then again im just a n*gga, sinner, poetic killer 

Clyde? me? na please

my cold heart is slowly melting 

like the wax of a candle

if i ever give in to the negativity and im broken and dismantled

i hope you're the first to take those pieces and reassemble-

them to their original form

you down for that?

cause im down to sew you back together if any part of you is ever torn

doesnt matter if its heart, mind, or soul

this is my perspective though

and its not changing anytime time soon

cause staying away from you is something i cant do

~PEACE

@PoeticallyGifted

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darylg44 says:

Nice writing
 

love_supreme says:

This is an excellent write.

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