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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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PATIENCE (a love letter)

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Her name was Patience, She worked on  Virtue,

A therapist  who  helped  me  with  ongoing  issues

No  finger  pointing  and  no  need  for  appointments

Not  always  convenient,  but  timely  anointment

I’ve  dated  her  twin,  quickly  be-coming  Impatient

Going  all  in  without  weighing  situations  remaining

Jumping  off  on  1st  stops  along  lines  of  no  intuition

Positioning  my  want  before  the  reality  of  real  need

I’ve  been  lead  off,  from  being  fed  up  in  not  believing

Receiving  meals  without  thoroughly  checking   menus

Hourglass  was  her  rapture,  which  she  carried  with  poise

Her  silence  is  golden,  like  skin,  she  never  puts  on  make  up

Her  legs  run  the  entirety  of   the  whole  human  race in sum

Watching  my  back,  even  when  I’m  out  creeping   with  Fate

Never   late  because  of  her  constant  companion  relative,  Faith

On  loan  to  me  and  for  me  to use  to  gain experience  in  self-control

To  watch  her  work  out  for  me,  is  to  see  a  perfectly  arched  backbone

Even  when  met  with  Hate,  her  demure  never  ceases  to  endure

So  pure  is  this  woman,  I  long  to  love  her  constancy  in  perpetuity

Forever  losing  myself  in  her  serenity,   until  time  guts  out  long-suffering

Be  with  me  Patience,  for  with  you  by  my  side,  earth’s  gravity  becomes……

WEIGHTLESS

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love_supreme says:

I have no words for this one. This one is ethereally indescribable. Excellent write.
 

LP45 says:

An excellent write 2b. Impeccable imagery and visualization. Thank you for sharing.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Most excellent scribe! Very inspiring

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hymnagen says:

Pure fiyah, bruh! My kind of poetry. Most enjoyable!

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mlowe5 says:

Another profound teaching coming from you, my Brother 2b2b2! Well penned with so much magnetic imagery that pulls you in from the beginning to the end. Thanks for the share and continuous inspiration.
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks to ALL....ONE....Write On!!
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KingQadarDwon' says:

This is superb bro.. Very well crafted piece...
 

danadane says:

Good job on this....one of your best!

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