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Tali
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lightness in the dark
WORDS ARE POWERFUL, USE THEM WISELY.

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SHE

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SHE IS A COMMANDING FORCE

POWERFUL LIKE THE WIND IN HER LIBERATION, AND  COMPLICATED, AND CONFLICTED

BUT SO BEAUTIFUL.

SHE TAKES THE WORLD AND PUTS IT ONTO HER BACK

SHE FEELS THE PAIN OF THE UNIVERSE  ETCHED INTO HER PSYCHE

MOST NIGHTS IT TORTURES HER SOUL

HOW UNGRATEFUL IS THIS WORLD TO RECIEVE SUCH A GEM

WHO'S HEART FEELS SO DEEPLY

SHE CHANNELS ENERGIES THAT MOST MEN DON'T UNDERSTAND.

KINGS AND QUEENS HAVE CHASED HER TYPE OF WISDOM INTO THE DEEPEST CORNERS OF THE MOON

HER WORDS ARE SEDUCTIVE , WITH EVERY LETTER ROLLING OFF OF HER LIPS LIKE SWEET HONEY

SHE CAN FEEL YOUR VIBRATION BEFORE YOU ARRIVE

AND YOU SPEND YOUR DAYS WANDERING THROUGHOUT THE THOUGHTS THAT SHE HAS AWAKENED IN YOU

SHE'S INVADED YOUR MIND

YOU CRAVE HER FRAGRANCE

YOU ARE ADDICTED TO HER

YOU.NEED.HER.

YOU WONDER WHAT THIS MELANIN GODDESS MUST TASTE LIKE

MOST NIGHTS IT DRIVES YOU INSANE

SHE IS A RUBY IN A SEA OF ROCKS

A RARE FIND SHE IS CONSPICUOUS

SHE IS MAGICAL, WHIMSICAL AND FREE

ANSWERING TO NO ONE, AND LOVING ALL

YOUR SOULS COLLIDE INTO A SYMPHONY OF DEEP CONNECTIONS YOU ARE

KINDRED SPIRITS

BROUGHT TOGETHER BY A FORCE THAT YOU COULD NEVER QUITE IDENTIFY

YOU HAVE, NEVER WANTED ANYONE OR ANYTHING AS MUCH AS YOU WANT HER

SHE  WILL, PLAGUE YOUR THOUGHTS IF SHE DEPARTS

YOU, ACHE FOR HER EVEN WHEN SHE IS NEAR

YOU. NEED.  HER.

SHE HAS AN OBSESSION WITH WORDS

AND WHEN THE SOUND OF HER VOICE LANDS INTO YOUR EARS IT IS MEZMORIZING & BREATHTAKING

SOMETHING SHARED BETWEEN GODS AND ANCESTORS, KINGS AND QUEENS

YOU, OFTEN WONDER WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE FOR HER TO BEAR YOUR LAST NAME

WHISPERING CHILDREN INTO HER WOMB LIKE BRANCHES FORM ONTO TREES

AND FOLLOWING WITH AN ETERNITY OF LOVE

YOU SMILE MORE

YOU DANCE MORE

SHE IS YOURS

SHE IS YOUR INFINITY.

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COMMENTS

 

mrmelody7 says:

Top to bottom great visualization your unique way of expression is enjoyable your inner eye your inner being see and feel the big picture of the world many do not
 

RonnieL says:

Truly captivating!!!! Visuals of words on point. Great write.

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Tali says:

Thanks so much, the feedback is awesome.
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mlowe5 says:

WOW! The imagery you conjure! Such a powerful and profound write. So much allegory woven within these rhythmic words. My heart raced with stanza--my mind exploding at the end. May the Most High continue to impregnate the womb of your fertile poetic mind. Write SISTER! Peace and Love, mlowe5: We.Need.You!
 

Tali says:

Thank you so much mlowe5. You guys may not understand how honored and encouraged I am with all of the feedback. I am VERY critical of my poems because of how they come to me. My writing time varies from 5 minutes to two months and this was something that just came to me after experiencing a little bit of a block for a few weeks. I really appreciate that you can read this and experience these types of emotions. I love words, but I love writing them even more lol if that makes any sense.

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