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blakmista
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Popular Still?

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just different

Views: 237

Your popularity, I do need a lot more clarity

it seems a little bit scary see, how you got

from being the man of an intelligent creator

to a domesticated rap artist. Where you going to?

Bit by bit, and inches by the mile, we tend to smile

afraid someone may see that sauce drippin' down

from a sloppy dollarbill, all wet "cause its all paper.

Having is wonderful, even attaining a lambroguini

which has doors, a hood hopefully, an engine, tires,

seats, and a horn. Therefore, you have just another car.

I'd invest in a more suitable venture, like senior care homes,

youth camps and centers, affordable housing...jus' saying.

Popular still? Help self, then others.... that is a better way.

PEACE!

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

Strikingly powerful tone

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blakmista says:

THANK YOU, SO MUCH...
 

LP45 says:

This is an excellent write blakmista. I see this imagery all too much in society these days. Some folk need to be checked. Thank you for sharing this.

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