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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Better now (after Post Malone)

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You probably think that you are better now (better now)

When I gave you everything you complain and frown (complain and frown)

I bared my soul and you tossed my heart on the ground (on the ground)

Then you said that I was $#!+ out of luck

Instead of arguing more, I just hopped in my truck

In a quiet rage, I whispered this into the steering wheel (oh wooo)

Without arguing I wish could explain exactly how I feel

I replayed our back and forth several times until I had an epiphany 

You were just being honest and you’re just not that into me

Asking you to love me (when you only like me), filled me with guilt

Now I feel like a neglected carton of almond milk

You had your taste, now the phase quickly passed

Expiration date came and went, now I’m in the trash

All along I was happy, hoping that you were too

Even after all these years we’re at odds - not sure what to do....

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mrmelody7 says:

Love the line expiration date came and went, now I am in the trash as far as not sure what to do say like Big Berry White sure you right then hop in your truck cause this just make um mad as hell why I dont know you agreeing wit um

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The Immortal Wize says:

TIGHT!

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks mrmelody7! Appreciate you reading it and giving me feedback.
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks The Poet Wize!

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