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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Burning Desire

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I want to be the flame on
 a matchstick that sets fire
to your mattress and burn
 you out of bed I want to be
the smoke that sets off your
 alarm and wakes you up
I want to be the one
 that cause you to have to go
outside and watch your
 house burn down I want
to be the fire that destroys
 your life and cause you to
have to start over again
 from scratch I want to do
that and I hope like me
 you're resilient and can
bounce back from such
 unfortunate crisis I do wish
you the best outcome
 

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mlowe5 says:

Thus, is spoken of the flame of love which makes hate spiraling smoke into nothingness. Nice write. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love.
 

LP45 says:

Amazing wordplay Wize! Thanks for sharing this fiyah!
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2b2b2 says:

Blinding Light....All Love....Tight Capture!! Bravo
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Charles2 says:

A soliloquy of Intricate staging, progressively doing the undoing ...intent for the absolute end which is love
 

Jkool86 says:

Through the fire and the flames can you stand the rain We’re going through seasons, I can endure the pain. I can dig this!

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