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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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Love Treason

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A beg for forgiveness
Repetitiously performed
Seeking sincerity prolonged
Performed for right and wrong reasons
Seasons of lust contain meanings
Felt by desires uncontained
Regret not enough to sustain refrain
Pain in not giving in, but inflicted still
Happy in doing it all over again
Wishing to stay with the accelerated heart rate
Destroying barriers of trust and security
Temporarily replaced by the power of attraction
Retaining Love is an outdated satisfaction
Replacing old with new, turns gray skies blue
Opportunistic rhythm of new found possibility
Deflated in unfulfilled and unrecognized dreams
It seems to carry the hold of tradition
As a demonized creature of lust keeps on reaching
For the latest and best expectation to satiate
Seasons of Love yet to experience and experiment
Sadly hoping for Love Treason to breed perfection
Questing on thru bodies in erotic deployment
Performing in tranquility and storms of complacency
Solely seeking continuity of sexual intensity building
Shared in the commonality of two loving spirits
Distracted by the high cost of maintenance in love
Uncompromised by seeming unattainable status
Love is as Love Attracts, Love lost as Love Detach!

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lloydboy35 says:

This is truly beautiful with great structure as well!!!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Lots of swing in this sometimes I think love is like the dog going in circles to catch his tail
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks lloydboy35, I appreciate the love.....ONE

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks mrmelody7, I'm no expert but have loved and loss more than once, but superficial excitement no doubt can be derived in the sport of the chase.....ONE
 

Miss_chaniel says:

Beautiful art !!!
 

darylg44 says:

love this piece 2b. you paint a very nice visual picture with your word choice. great job with this one

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks Miss_chaniel (winks)

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks kindly my brother glad you dug it.....ONE

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Devonte7638 says:

Another great piece

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LP45 says:

I enjoyed reading this 2B, Excellent capture. Thank you for sharing this. Namaste.

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