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KEEPING IT REAL SERIES POEM#1: PHONIES (Men)

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 It's hard to keep it real when, every one else is phonie,

They walk around pretending to be something their not, 

you know the type, The one's that act real corny.

 

Some phonies even yell out "Aye man i gets stacks you know the deal",

When in reality, they live in their ma's basement, can't even pay there own 

phone bill.

 

Some phonies, walk around showing off their new kicks,

When in reality, they broke into someone's house and 

stole those shoe's from some lil kids.

 

Some phonies ride around in a fancy car with there homie's,

When in reality, it's your ma's car because you dont have any money.

 

Some phonies walk around trying to flash money,

When in reality their ma gave it to them reminding them

to pay the rent for me.

 

Some phonies walk around acting all tuff,

When in reality every fight they've been in they've gotten beat up.

 

Some phonies walk around playing the role of "gangsta", 

When in reality they live in the suburbs, never living that life,

making them a wangsta.

 

Some phonies think there cool because they smoke weed,

When in reality, they never passed 7th grade and barely can read.

 

So for all you phonies out there, 

Who dont keep it real, Just know there's

people out there who know's the real deal.

 

 

 

 

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DreamPoet says:

Ha! Ma great poem, I know at least 5 people who are phonies. Some people wont agree with this poem, only the one's who know what's up know what this poem is about. Great job ma!

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The Immortal Wize says:

Flat line! a big swallow of reality, this is a winner.

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ms.poeticpassion says:

Standing ovation...... I know a few phonies myself (lol) Great work.

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tretre says:

Thank you DreamPoet! Thanks for always showin love. Keep that pen movin!
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tretre says:

Thank you Wize Dom....For always showin love. I'm glad to have a amazing poet such as yourself comment. Thanks. Keep that pen movin!

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tretre says:

Thank you ms.poeticpassion...I believe we all know someone who is phony. Thanks for commenting. Keep that pen movin!

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Jordanta says:

Yep! half the people I know, just kidding great write!

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