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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Who would admit that they cried over there first love
 

I did I cried like a baby I thought I was going to die
 

I never felt pain like that before I was so helpless
 

She was so heartless I was in so much misery I wished
 

To be invisible I didn’t want to live no more the pain
 

Oh the pain seemed to linger on I did not know how
 

To express how I was feeling I was so in love in the beginning
 

I never prepared for the ending all that suffering and I don’t
 

Even remember her name but I really loved ….

What’s her name
 

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skyyberry1987 says:

Deep i love it

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Wordman21 says:

Wild, love the closing....

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SoFloetic says:

LOVE IT!!!!

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