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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Bout to Blow

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hand me my hat hand me my coat tying my shoes it's time for me to go you're holding on to me too tight I can't move my feet feels like I'm dying in my sleep you say you're helping me to get up off the ground feels heavy like you're holding me down I don't know if I'm just jumping to  conclusions or paranoid I heard you talking about me  In the middle of the night what you said wasn't right the scars on my back are hurting it's a sign for certain the hairs on the back of my neck  stands at attention  I feel like I'm at a lynching you cook but I don't eat my stomachs bad  bleeding ulcers you're draining me nothings left but the pain in me and a cup of misery triggering something inside of me something I hide in me I don't try to be hush don't wake the beast let it sleep it need its rest the last time it got loose what a mess  it's no longer a part of me  but it still rides with me I'm out the box  I'm not a puppy  don't rub me the wrong way it's not your day your time has come I'm just trying to give you a chance take it and run

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mrmelody7 says:

Splendid write, that suffocating choking kind of love
 

michael angelo says:

i'm feelin this one
 

royale jones says:

straight from the volcano himself! fire!

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blakkbeauty says:

Love it

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